Monday, September 22, 2008

False Advertising

55 word story

His online dating profile read "tall, dark, and handsome."
Yet...here I sat with a 4' white man with crazy eyes and buckteeth,

"You're really cute," he said with a repulsing grin.
"Thanks. You are...too...," I said while trying to hold back the urge to vomit.
"Check please."

4 comments:

nikix16 said...

Eheheh.

Nice.

brittaemily said...

haha! oh my I love it!! that would totally suck.. I totally feel bad for her.

pfffitsLauren. said...

Hahah what a creeper. Vivid visual.

Pakou Lee said...

Love the ending so far. I hope if you continue to write this story, it'll get better and more surprising.

And thanks for your comments you left me! :)